Prologue: My World - Page 02

I find this a very unique first page, wonderful use of detail, and overall very well done.

Vision: I think you'll have to look at the comic page for this. 5 stars

Originality: It is unlike anything I've read! And this is only the first page of what looks to be a very well done comic series! 5 stars.

Technique: I will honestly say I believe you have done a good job on this as well. Even though it isn't a 5 star, I still think you did a wonderful job. 4 stars.

Impact: It is very moving and I be inspires others to make well made comics that will catch someones eye when they look at it. 4 1/2 stars.

Overall: It is a very well done comic and is very entertaining, even if there is only one word in this comic page. I did notice, though, you missed the cutie marks, I think that should be a work on in the future, well done! Keep this up!

Overall rating: 4 1/2 stars, very well done.