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this is a truely great comic and i wish to see more soon,the only thing that could ever.possiable.make this comic ANY better,would have it be less time in between the comics,so you wouldn't have to wait a decade to read the next one :) !man,it's hard to write a a 100+ critique! so you can stop reading because i am going to be random from this point on! i am princess luna! thuo shall bow down to thou princess!!!...tia,why are they not bowing to thei? I SAID BOW TO THIO PRINCESS OF THE NIGHT!!! ( i told you i was going to be random lolz)
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I have to say, your art style is quite stunning. The lighting, object placement and expressions really make for a unique feeling. You definitely have a clear vision of where you want the story to go so far, keeping the reader on the edge of their seat. I believe you should keep your quality over quantity approach going. People should definitely learn that this takes time and that if you rushed it this would not have the same atmosphere as you put forth. This should definitely develop into probably one of the best comics (although it's too good for that title, haha.) I've seen on DeviantArt. I hope to see more from you in the future. :)
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:iconphoenixinator:
Phoenixinator Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
..Was about whatever is about to come through that door...
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:iconjack13386:
JACK13386 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2015
when the next page
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015
For future reference, Spike, I'd suggest ditching the ball of yarn; it's only slowing you down.
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:iconstitch62651:
stitch62651 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm going to miss this comic, and I'm looking forward to future projects!
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:iconforever-pegasister:
Forever-Pegasister Featured By Owner May 16, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
what was the dream What ??? WHAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!111crying :crying: rvmp Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon Miuna Crying Icon 
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:icondevildragon1:
devildragon1 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015
28 28........WERE IS 28!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconsolarchaser334:
SolarChaser334 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
when is next :D ??
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:iconsamykhadre:
samykhadre Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2014
the next is for wen ?
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:iconnebulanyx1:
NebulaNyx1 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014
its sad to see this get canceled. It had such potential. 
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:icongazellete:
Gazellete Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Student Digital Artist
It's not cancelled you know........... 
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:iconnebulanyx1:
NebulaNyx1 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015
Umm the author said its not being continued. 
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:icongazellete:
Gazellete Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  Student Digital Artist
When?
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:iconluvluvdarkness:
LuvLuvDarkness Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*eyes twitching* the 'next' button isn't working. I clicked it like a hundred times and nothing happened.
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:iconangelwings77762:
angelwings77762 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG WHY IS THERE NO MORE...I WANT TO READ. 
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:iconmonika41:
monika41 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
I need to say the door isn't suppose to be in  there or bed is moving 
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:icondrx-raven:
DrX-Raven Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014
Raven: ..... A pencil and.... a thingie?
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:iconstreamsecret:
StreamSecret Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
heh heh, spike........

wow, your artwork is really pretty, i love it! 

and please continue. you're doing a great job Nod 
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:iconcoolcoolskies:
CoolCoolSkies Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So this won't be continuing if I read your update correctly, right? It makes me so sad since it is so pretty and looks so interesting.
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:iconxvampexx:
XvampeXX Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014
no more next page ?
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:iconpony-fanatic:
pony-fanatic Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2014
This is genius! Please please please draw more
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:iconkeeper-0f-souls:
Keeper-0f-souls Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
More please! ^.^
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:iconthorondraco:
Thorondraco Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
..........damn this is amazingly drawn. why haven't you contyinued it?
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:iconepid13:
epid13 Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
more! :love: 
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:icongoldcoast456:
Goldcoast456 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014   Digital Artist
It's a really good comic. :3 Please make more. I-if that's okay with you. :iconfluttershyplz:
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:iconxxterror-horrorxx:
XXterror-horrorXX Featured By Owner May 2, 2014
Comic next?
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:iconrenardprower:
RenardPrower Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just realized that I've added every page of this to my favorites. 0.o So good.
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:iconatsariashh:
ATsariashh Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
Wanna more
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:icon2nightprincessluna:
2NightPrincessLuna Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
Please, can you do some more comics? :) :) :)
(Never give up). :heart:
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:iconbellekitten:
Bellekitten Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
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:icondarthpinkie42:
DarthPinkie42 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
next?
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:iconprincessjulliet123:
princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
lol
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:iconamadcutie:
aMadCutie Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist
ehmergerwd spike is so adorable cx
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:iconnebulanyx1:
NebulaNyx1 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014
I seriously wish this comic had not been canceled. It had so much potential.
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:iconhopez72499:
Hopez72499 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student General Artist
When will there be more! I love this comic!
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:iconlouise56:
louise56 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
Really? i have gone reading 12 millions of comics and that was it?!?! i have to wait for a thousand years! for all of this craziness i have gone through?!?! F you!
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:iconjamesrye:
JamesRye Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
Someday page 28 will come and I will be ready to fav it...
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:iconshadowrater1:
ShadowRater1 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
what the heck is that weird dark and light thing because it locks scary.  
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:iconcloudnofeather:
CloudNoFeather Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student General Artist
When u do next?
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:iconrecon1996:
Recon1996 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
Seriously we have to deal with this guy again, have we all been through this enough with It?
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:iconihadnothingbetter2do:
Ihadnothingbetter2do Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014
What guy?
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:iconrecon1996:
Recon1996 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014
IT!!! The clown.
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:icona6p:
a6p Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nooo! Not :iconitplz:!!!
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:iconmarkwhitee:
MarkWhitee Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
when are you posting the next one, I've fallen in love with this story
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:iconalexwarlorn:
alexwarlorn Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014
OH COME ON! TELL US!!!!
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:iconsaddust:
Saddust Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
Hello, your work is excellent. I hope everything is fine by your side and that your concentration will go better and better (^v^) as your fans miss you.
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:iconcloudnofeather:
CloudNoFeather Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student General Artist
when u post the next?
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:iconflight300:
Flight300 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 Spike is holding a pencil... if they have pencils in Equestria, why do they always use quills?Big Fool Emoji-23 (What) [V4] 
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:iconluvluvdarkness:
LuvLuvDarkness Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's what the government wants you to think!

Sorry, I couldn't help myself.
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:iconnightwolfeclipse:
NightWolfEclipse Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Were next pg?
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:iconwolfwaker101:
wolfwaker101 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
Do you mind giving me the next page on my, uh, page?
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