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Oh my.

This image.

Oh, the meteor fell in the Everfree Forest after all.

Immediately my vision was drawn to the object. Zoom in, observe it for any hints, any clues.
Six marks like six Elements. The shape is vaguely mask-like. Is it a head? Of a sculpture?
After a good minute of pondering I came to the obvious conclusion: it's there to tantalize us. It's a long time until we get to know what it's all about, a mystery. So, beyond observations I decided to give it a rest. I'd give a glimpse to the rest of the picture, pretty scenic backgrounds and move on.

So I did.
And only then I spotted Zecora.

Oh my. That was unexpected. Truly masterful use of focus and shadow to first draw my attention away from the "backgrounds" and then hit me on the head with them. I literally squealed from joy - Zecora is my third favorite pony (after the princesses), and introducing her here is bound to make the story awesome. Immediately, a conflict: "It's dangerous, don't touch it! No, she's wise, she knows what she's doing... I hope! Where, how would she learn this? I'd hate to see her fall the first victim of the newcomer! No, she's too smart for that. I'd hate you forever if you made her dumb enough to die now..."

And only then I spotted the little word cloud. "Luna."

Oh, Zecora knows this. That warm fuzzy feeling: everything's gonna be all right. Zecora and Luna. This will be awesome.

Look, you deserve five stars in all, Vision, Originality and Technique with this image. Wonderful work, disturbing vision (I do dislike the look of the "egg" - but I'm quite sure I'm supposed to dislike it.) But for Impact you deserve no less than six stars. That picture was the biggest WHOA of the last months for me.
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:iconexmedal:
ExMedal Featured By Owner May 30, 2014  Student
looks kind of like the Stone Mask from JJBA
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skullette13 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014
CHANGELING!
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princessjulliet123 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
where the hell did that come from?! its kinda creepy how she says luna!
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ScotchNvl Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
 shockedplz ALIENZ!!!
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:iconsilverlunawolf6:
silverlunawolf6 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You went all-out right here.
It has an ethereal, Ghibli-type feel. I love it.
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SaraSword Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Zecora...
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:icongeneral5:
General5 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
A 7th element of harmony?
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BrutalityInc Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
WTF is this thing? Is it alien?!
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
yes you have discovered the secret
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:iconbrutalityinc:
BrutalityInc Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013
If it comes from outer space, doesn't look natural, and the world one lives on does not have any orbital capabilities to speak of, then it's most likely alien.
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Krashface Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well, at the end, is not "The Mark".
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
yes exactly
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:iconbrutalityinc:
BrutalityInc Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
Now the question is - what does it do? Is it dangerous? And most importantly, how to destroy it if it is proven dangerous? What's its potential utility if it could be controlled regardless of danger?
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
keep going and you will have the story cracked in no time!
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GuardianAngell13 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oo Oo suspense!
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alwilliams0605 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
i need to read more all the other comics havent been updated for me to read im soo board please i must read more
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ThePenVsTheSword Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student Writer
This has been pretty great so far!
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:iconadreamrider:
ADreamRider Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...ohmygod... :squee:
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bigbangbilly Featured By Owner May 13, 2013
Is this the end of the prologue?
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cap1727 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
Zecora ?....... AWESOME :D
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:icontwylite-sparkle:
Twylite-Sparkle Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
How's about continuing the story, then we can talk about critiquing, hmmm?
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WTFOMGBBQZZZ Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
Definitely agree here!
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CS-epicness Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz moaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar plz
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kika-fox Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I think I know what pony that is!!
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:iconlegioner8:
Legioner8 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
Watch this - [link] (translation in description)
And change Elves to Zebras and Nevendaar to Equstria for maximum awesomeness
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:iconniknit:
niknit Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Great!
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Maddog3060 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013
Ut oh.
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RaenBoow Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Neeeeeat! :D Very mysterious! Zecora? Luna!? WTF!? :D Awesome! :happybounce:
:iconbraceyourselfplz: - The questions has been unleashed.....
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Twylite-Sparkle Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2013
Yeah, the waiting is the hardest part...
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Galen1 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!
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AppleCider1412 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ok i finally catch up on this story and now this is just sad. it's january and it was las updated in november
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PonyMystic Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
omg!!
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PonyMystic Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
GASP ZECORA FOUND LUNA IN AN EGG WHAT
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king-kaze Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
when will the next page be out?
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
theinexplicablebrony Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013
beats me
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:iconponymystic:
PonyMystic Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOOOOOOOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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TheRyanLikesArt Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!
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PonyMystic Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ikr!? :D
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TheRyanLikesArt Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!!!!!
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PonyMystic Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ME TOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
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mangakashadowx Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist
wow a mask from the stars... hothing good can comes from a mask from the stars... just ask for majora's maks LOL
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tape63 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Last comic I thought it was an egg, but now I'm not so sure...
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
yeah it's like who even knows WHAT it is

(me)
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:iconfdrawer:
fdrawer Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I like a lot the coloring man! =)
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:iconpinkypie23:
pinkypie23 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
are you alright my good sir
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:iconbigspaceplz:
BigSpaceplz Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Sir you seem a little DEAD.
Did something on real life happen?
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
no just real life
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:iconchaosmalefic:
chaosmalefic Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am hiting "Next Page" link but it doesn't work!


oh cruel world
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:icongrate4evil:
Grate4Evil Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
Sothing tells Nightmare Moon going to be making a come-back.
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