This is a beautiful piece so far. I really hope you will be able to finish it one day. The artwork is great, the story sounds interesting... and it makes me smile... That's what the cartoon used to do. It did made you laugh, but most importantly... it made you smile.
If you'd ever publish this as a book, I'd may be willing to buy it... if I could afford it.
I would like to thank you to have written Rainbow Dash like still being playful but having knowledge in her own domain and not having contempt for the intellectual passion of Twilight.
The trope of the "friends hate to learn thing and make a joke of the bookish girl" is saddening. MLP was great to have subvert that (for example in the episode with daring-doo, where ALL the friends of Rainbow dash are laughing immediately when she says books are uncool). In a time where so many are anti-intellectual, it's very welcome.