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Prologue: My World - Page 07

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This guy.

This guy, you guys.

You guys, this guy saved my bacon in all kinds of ways. I am going on a trip in like 10 hours and I wanted to finish a page before I left, and not only did this guy, LightBulb, offer to do the inks while I was painting backgrounds, but he also saved me from accidentally collapsing a 56mg .PSD file into a 72dpi copy.

This guy, ladies and gentlemen, deserves your accolades.



In other news twilight is enjoying spooky story time far too much.

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Ok, so overall, this page is pretty great but there are a few flubs holding it back from being fantastic. Your coloring and lighting are pretty amazing overall, but there are a few bits that don't make sense to me. The first panels shading seems off, I can't really describe where the light source is coming from. Dash's mouth in the third panel looks flat, but I think that's just because of the angle. Rarity is wrapped pretty tightly, it actually looks a little uncomfortable, but that may be just me. Twilight's anatomy in the second to last panel is all screwed up too. However, overall I really enjoy this page, especially Pinkie Pie. You've captured everyone's personality in top third of the page so well, I almost feel as if they're speaking. The middle right panel is especially well done too, it's very dreamlike.

And Pinkie's face in the second panel is so priceless I have to download this. Good work!