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Prologue: My World - Page 07 by theinexplicablebrony Prologue: My World - Page 07 by theinexplicablebrony
This guy.

This guy, you guys.

You guys, this guy saved my bacon in all kinds of ways. I am going on a trip in like 10 hours and I wanted to finish a page before I left, and not only did this guy, LightBulb, offer to do the inks while I was painting backgrounds, but he also saved me from accidentally collapsing a 56mg .PSD file into a 72dpi copy.

This guy, ladies and gentlemen, deserves your accolades.



In other news twilight is enjoying spooky story time far too much.

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Critique by Stavekoff Jul 20, 2013, 10:11:37 PM
Ok, so overall, this page is pretty great but there are a few flubs holding it back from being fantastic. Your coloring and lighting are pretty amazing overall, but there are a few bits that don't make sense to me. The first panels shading seems off, I can't really describe where the light source is coming from. Dash's mouth in the third panel looks flat, but I think that's just because of the angle. Rarity is wrapped pretty tightly, it actually looks a little uncomfortable, but that may be just me. Twilight's anatomy in the second to last panel is all screwed up too. However, overall I really enjoy this page, especially Pinkie Pie. You've captured everyone's personality in top third of the page so well, I almost feel as if they're speaking. The middle right panel is especially well done too, it's very dreamlike.

And Pinkie's face in the second panel is so priceless I have to download this. Good work!
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:iconstrawykiller123:
strawykiller123 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
twilights like "the fuck you say about my story that shit was terrifying"
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:iconstrabatz:
Strabatz Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Awww. i just could cuddle Pinkie in every panel...
Your art is wonderful.
It gave me instant goosbump from the frist page of this comic.
People like you give me the fate, that there is one day...
*Sigh* nah that is way too emotional.
*Hugs you* thank you for beeing such an awesome part of the fandom.
and everypony who is reading this, feel hugged too ^_^
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:iconxxbramblezxx:
xXBramblezXx Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Unusual gifts....I would say Twilight, but the last "Sea Of Dreams" was 334 years ago, so that's not possible. x33
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:iconmsteetertotter:
msteetertotter Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What the heck is wrong with Rarity in the second panel? ... Marshmallow?
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
she is wrapped in a blanket.

to date, 0.00% of people reading this comic have been able to guess this fact. so i am going to redraw it.
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:iconmsteetertotter:
msteetertotter Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You should make it a bit more flat, like as not so curled up around her and a different color
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:icongoldcoast456:
Goldcoast456 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
Pinkie in the first and second panel just makes me laugh.XD
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:iconwizardglitter:
wizardglitter Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Wow! I just started reading these and it is awesome so far!
And I have to say, you make Rainbow look really pretty :D
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WTFOMGBBQZZZ Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Twilight's face: priceless.
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:iconraenboow:
RaenBoow Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
From someone who claims to not know what they are doing you REALLY nail it ^^ IT is there and has been nailed greatly :D Can I pause reading this comic now if my house started burning? .....I would probably read the next page as quick as hell first. :XD:
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:iconenmar123:
Enmar123 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
dang, i like the style of these comics
very nice :D
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:iconphenometron:
Phenometron Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012
Twilight is a true historian. ;)
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:iconlawlzers101:
lawlzers101 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
Panel Two pinkies face XD
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:iconshilvicthehedgehog:
shilvicthehedgehog Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Artist
Heh heh twilight
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:iconbrokengrayheart:
BrokenGrayHeart Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Look at panel 6 without bubblespeach.
:iconknowwhatimeanplz:
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:iconraenboow:
RaenBoow Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lulz :XD:
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:iconcrystal-eclair:
Crystal-Eclair Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Twilight's face in the bottom left panel, priceless
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:icongingerfrost:
gingerfrost Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
OH powers.... *reaches for the ponies born* want one for personal assassin slave.
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:iconflawless-brony:
flawless-brony Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Pinkie Pie in Panel 2. SO funny.
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:iconmylittlemuffinz:
MyLittleMuffinZ Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Im commenting a lot on this series, but i think i might put my own story in this somehow, i-if thats okay with you
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
How so?
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:iconmylittlemuffinz:
MyLittleMuffinZ Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hmmm, about how strange things happening in Equestria and my OC somehow is related to that... i guess. Im not very good at planning stories, but this is a good start.
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
theinexplicablebrony Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
Yeah, why not.
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:icondrakin929:
Drakin929 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2012
I'm betting the answer is either that Nightmare Moon first came into being or much further back than that, during one of the showers, was when Luna and Celestia first arrived in Equestria.
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:iconthe-shipping-killer:
The-Shipping-Killer Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
Fancy
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:icongranonis:
Granonis Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
I like da evil look on Twilight's face on the second-to-last panel.
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:iconacknown3:
Acknown3 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
334 years * 3 occurrences = ~1000 years ago.

Luna is shown in a panel.

Ponies acting strangely.



I'm calling it.
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:iconmylittlemuffinz:
MyLittleMuffinZ Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So thats what happened to luna in the last 1000 years
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:iconnaruhinalovr:
naruhinalovr Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
WHAT HAPPENED!?!?!? THE STORY WAS JUST GETTING TO THE GOOD PART!
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
SORRY I HAD TO GO SOMEWHERE
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:iconcharlesdeleroy:
Charlesdeleroy Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012
Mysterious things... like hot dogs buns and hotdogs having the same number of servings per package!
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
hahah

that's just silliness
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:iconcifyra:
Cifyra Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL@ Pinkie pie in 2nd panel
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:iconmylittlemuffinz:
MyLittleMuffinZ Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Creeeeeeeping
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:iconcifyra:
Cifyra Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Creeeeeeeeepy too
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:iconmajic-namie:
majic-namie Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
if it passed more recently i would guess that pinkie was born during one
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:iconpreanubis:
Preanubis Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
334 years, that means that 3 passes by Equestria before this, it lined up with about Luna became corrupted.

1002 years ago.
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:iconacknown3:
Acknown3 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012
Great minds think alike ;)
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:iconpreanubis:
Preanubis Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2012
Some great mind I am, I forgot the word "when"! XD
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:iconfadri:
Fadri Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pinkie showing her eyes in every panel is hilarious. xD
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:iconmuffin-unsane:
Muffin-Unsane Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I lost it at Pinkie in the second panel. Seriously fab.
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
yes, I am SUPER-happy that was funny because I am not at all sure of my sense of humour
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:iconmuffin-unsane:
Muffin-Unsane Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your sense of humor is fab no worries. Really, its kinda hard to mess up Pinkie Pie.
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Blackbelt5610 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Welp, this looks interesting. Now I'm following you.
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:iconanhero23:
anhero23 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Can you give a good estimation on when the next panel will come out?
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
Hahah, hopefully when I get back (in a week) I should be able to work a couple pages out because I will still be waiting for my next college term to begin! After that it might slow down again to one page a week.
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:iconanhero23:
anhero23 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012
I can't wait to see more of the comic, man. Have fun on your trip!
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:iconnoun-person:
noun-person Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Dash's eyes look off in the last panel.
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:icontheinexplicablebrony:
aw man not again. gotta figure that out
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