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Prologue: My World - Page 07 by theinexplicablebrony Prologue: My World - Page 07 by theinexplicablebrony
This guy.

This guy, you guys.

You guys, this guy saved my bacon in all kinds of ways. I am going on a trip in like 10 hours and I wanted to finish a page before I left, and not only did this guy, LightBulb, offer to do the inks while I was painting backgrounds, but he also saved me from accidentally collapsing a 56mg .PSD file into a 72dpi copy.

This guy, ladies and gentlemen, deserves your accolades.

In other news twilight is enjoying spooky story time far too much.

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Critique by Stavekoff Jul 20, 2013, 10:11:37 PM
Ok, so overall, this page is pretty great but there are a few flubs holding it back from being fantastic. Your coloring and lighting are pretty amazing overall, but there are a few bits that don't make sense to me. The first panels shading seems off, I can't really describe where the light source is coming from. Dash's mouth in the third panel looks flat, but I think that's just because of the angle. Rarity is wrapped pretty tightly, it actually looks a little uncomfortable, but that may be just me. Twilight's anatomy in the second to last panel is all screwed up too. However, overall I really enjoy this page, especially Pinkie Pie. You've captured everyone's personality in top third of the page so well, I almost feel as if they're speaking. The middle right panel is especially well done too, it's very dreamlike.

And Pinkie's face in the second panel is so priceless I have to download this. Good work!
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strawykiller123 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
twilights like "the fuck you say about my story that shit was terrifying"
Strabatz Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013
Awww. i just could cuddle Pinkie in every panel...
Your art is wonderful.
It gave me instant goosbump from the frist page of this comic.
People like you give me the fate, that there is one day...
*Sigh* nah that is way too emotional.
*Hugs you* thank you for beeing such an awesome part of the fandom.
and everypony who is reading this, feel hugged too ^_^
xXBramblezXx Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Unusual gifts....I would say Twilight, but the last "Sea Of Dreams" was 334 years ago, so that's not possible. x33
msteetertotter Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What the heck is wrong with Rarity in the second panel? ... Marshmallow?
she is wrapped in a blanket.

to date, 0.00% of people reading this comic have been able to guess this fact. so i am going to redraw it.
msteetertotter Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You should make it a bit more flat, like as not so curled up around her and a different color
Goldcoast456 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
Pinkie in the first and second panel just makes me laugh.XD
wizardglitter Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Wow! I just started reading these and it is awesome so far!
And I have to say, you make Rainbow look really pretty :D
WTFOMGBBQZZZ Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2013
Twilight's face: priceless.
RaenBoow Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
From someone who claims to not know what they are doing you REALLY nail it ^^ IT is there and has been nailed greatly :D Can I pause reading this comic now if my house started burning? .....I would probably read the next page as quick as hell first. :XD:
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